Sunday, December 14, 2014

Polaroid Paragraphs #4 - Luisa has a little bell

When her mother Clara was in the hospital and Luisa was in the sixth grade, Luisa and her dad picked out the bell for when she came home.  It was just big enough to be heard through the house, even if she rang it softly, which truth be told was all she could do.

Clara fought against ringing it, not wanting to be a burden and a bother, but still there were times when she needed help and there was nobody close by.  Not often – every few days, maybe.

Clara held on for two months before the cancer ate her away and the bell stopped ringing.  While her mom was back home, Luisa loved and hated the bell.  It would ring and she’d tell herself, “Every time a bell rings, an angel gets its wings.” She’d walk into the bedroom, delighted to still see her mom, but aching for the day when she got her wings.

That was twenty years ago.

Luisa Payne, nurse, works hospice now.  She drives from house to house and rings the door bells, and her clients’ caretakers invite her in.  She gets to spend a little time with their angels, and then she moves on to the next house.  She gets to know the angels well, each in their turn, and gets to know when they’ve had enough.  Sometimes, she leaves them a little present for later, and then she goes home. 


That night, she cuddles her cats and plays with her dogs and calls up papa to check on him, like always. Just before she goes to bed, though, she rings her mother’s bell to let Clara know a new angel is on their way. And then she sleeps.

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